“Sunday Heat, Ventura Detour” is a nostalgic, richly textured short story set in Southern California, where heat and memory converge in a single sun-soaked Sunday drive. Through deft storytelling, the narrator crafts a tale that is as much about familial bonds and life’s quiet decisions as it is about a literal journey to the coast.
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“Sunday Heat, Ventura Detour”
By Harry Arabian
It was one of those Southern California Sundays when the sun doesn't just shine — it declares war. Heat shimmered off the pavement like a warning, and the air buzzed with the sort of restless energy that drives every Angeleno toward the coast in search of relief. I was behind the wheel, gripping the steering wheel like it might melt right out of my hands, heading north on the 101 toward Ventura Beach.
My older brother lounged in the passenger seat, his left leg dangling out the window like he was eighteen again, the wind tugging at his faded cargo shorts. Behind us, my four teenage sons were jammed in like surfboards in a rental van — all knees, elbows, earbuds, and the heady mix of cheap sunscreen and impatience.
Everyone had the same idea that day. The Pacific Coast Highway turned into a metallic river of stalled dreams — each car crawling forward, one tortured foot at a time. Engines wheezed. Children cried. Someone's boombox blared '80s pop like it was a defiant anthem against gridlock.
My brother, ever the opportunist, leaned in. “Let’s just take the next exit and head back to my place. Cold pool, fridge full of drinks, no angry sunburned dads yelling about parking.”
He had a point. A solid one. It was tempting. After all, I hadn't seen him in weeks. Life, with its schedules and silent calendars, has a way of pushing the people you care about to the edges of your vision.
But something about that day insisted we keep going.
Then it appeared — the exit ramp, curving like an escape hatch from the heat. And right behind it, bold and blue, a sign that called to something ancient and salty in my blood:
Ventura Beach – Next Right.
Another followed, equally clear:
Beach Parking – $20.
I didn’t hesitate. I took the exit.
My brother let out a half-laugh, half-groan and dug into his wallet, pulling out a worn twenty like he was surrendering to destiny.
“I knew we were at Ventura Beach,” I said, “when you were holding the parking fee like a VIP pass.”
He just shook his head and handed the bill to a sunburned teenager in a neon vest bright enough to guide ships home.
We parked, and the boys exploded from the car like fireworks — towels flapping, flip-flops flying, yelling over one another about who packed the football, who forgot the snacks, and who called dibs on the boogie board.
The sand was scorching. The sky, blinding. A gull shrieked overhead like it had something to say about our decision.
And then the ocean slapped us awake.
That first wave hit like a baptism — cold, bracing, and real. I looked over at my brother, saltwater dripping from his hair, and he gave me that grin. The same one from way back, when the world was smaller and summers lasted longer.
“Totally worth twenty bucks,” he said.
And he was right. The beach didn’t just cool us off — it reminded us of who we were. Brothers. Fathers. Sunburned fools chasing something honest in a world too often stuck in traffic.
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