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In "A Late-Night Visit" The father feels “slightly out of place, like someone who’d stepped out of a family photo and into a campus hallway.” This simile establishes the narrator’s split identity: part of a family unit, part of an independent college life.
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A Late-Night Visit
I was halfway through a statistics problem set, numbers swimming on the page, pencil hovering uselessly above the graph, when a quiet knock rattled my dorm door. Ten o’clock—too late for deliveries, too early for the night guard’s rounds. I wasn’t in the mood for company.
When I opened it, there stood my dad: wind-tousled hair, travel-creased jacket, and that familiar grin.
“Surprise,” he said. “I was in town and … I missed you.”
For a second I just blinked. He looked both perfectly ordinary and slightly out of place, like someone who’d stepped out of a family photo and into a campus hallway.
“You came all this way just to knock?” I asked.
He shrugged. “Figured the window was a risk.”
I laughed despite myself and let him in. He scanned the room as if each detail might explain my whole life—posters curling at the corners, the leaning stack of textbooks, the mug with three pens and one half-dead plant.
“So this is headquarters,” he said. “Tell me everything. Classes? Friends? Are you eating anything green?”
Questions tumbled out faster than I could answer. We sat cross-legged on the carpet, talking about professors, music, the coffee shop that made the best cinnamon latte—and how my econ professor still used an overhead projector like it was 1992, fumbling with clear plastic sheets while the class groaned. His eyes kept lighting up like I was telling him secrets from a faraway planet.
By the time I glanced at the clock it was a few minutes past eleven. “Uh, Dad … the front doors are locked now. Curfew. Only the night guard can buzz you out.”
He raised an eyebrow. “Curfew, huh? Guess I’ll stay here, then.”
“There’s only one bed,” I warned.
“Not a problem,” he said, mouth quirking. “Peaceful soldier, remember?”
I tossed him the extra blanket. He stretched out without complaint, a big silhouette against the narrow mattress. The radiator hummed. Outside, the campus settled into its winter hush.
I lay awake for a while, listening to his steady breathing. Just an hour ago I’d felt buried under numbers and obligations, half-convinced I was drowning on my own. But now—now it was as if he’d stepped back into the picture beside me, reminding me that I hadn’t really vanished from home. And home hadn’t vanished from me.


Book Club Discussion: A Late-Night Visit
ReplyDeleteOpening Impressions
What were your first reactions to the story? Did it feel nostalgic, comforting, bittersweet, or something else?
How did the late-night setting affect your reading of the father’s visit?
Characters & Relationships
How does the narrator’s relationship with their father come across in the dialogue?
Do you think the father feels out of place in the dorm, or does he adapt easily? What details support your answer?
What does the father’s visit reveal about the narrator’s current stage of life?
Themes & Symbols
The father is described as stepping “out of a family photo.” What does this image suggest about memory and belonging?
How do the ordinary dorm-room details (posters, textbooks, half-dead plant) function in the story?
What role does humor play in the father-child dynamic? How might the tone change without it?
Structure & Style
The story begins with stress (the statistics problem) and ends with calm reflection. How does this structure shape the reader’s emotional journey?
How effective did you find the final lines about “home”? Did they feel earned, or too direct?
Broader Reflections
Have you experienced a moment where an ordinary visit or gesture carried outsized emotional weight? How does that memory connect to this story?
Do you see the story as mainly about comfort, or about growth and independence? Could it be both?
If the narrator told this same story ten years later, how might the tone or focus shift?